peer help worksheet

Dear students, In order to appreciate your friends’ writing, please give simple corrections and suggestions or comments for the betterment of their writing. . .

You may choose some of the aspects of writing below to give comments

PEER HELP WORKSHEET

Content / Ideas

· Does it have excellent supporting details?

· Is it interesting to read? Appropriate title?

· Does it have unity and completeness?

· Is it compatible / in accordance to the assignment given?

Organization

1. Paragraph

· Has topic sentence with clear controlling idea?

· Has supporting sentences?

· Has concluding sentences?

· Has coherence and cohesion?

2. Essay

· Has introductory paragraph with clear thesis statament?

· Has body paragraphs with good organization?

· Has coherence and cohesion?

· Has concluding paragraph with summary, restatement of the thesis statement and final comment?

3. Grammar, spelling, Mechanics

· Any grammatical error? The use of tenses, active / passive voice, run-on sentence, mistakes in preposition, article use, sentence fragment, unclear sentence

· Any spelling mistake? Wrong word / form of word / word order?

· Demonstrate sophisticated choice of vocabulary items?

· Correct idiomatic use of vocabulary?

· Has good paragraph format?

· Demonstrate good use of capital letters, periode, line spacing, commas, and semicolons? (punctuation)

THANKS,

HAPPY COMMENTING,...:)

Unique dwelling

Dear students,,

Here are some eye-catching pictures of unique residences. Please choose one type of house and then describe it vividly (200-250 words) Use dictionary and internet sources to support your writing. To make your writing interesting and fun to read, You can copy the images and put them on your blog. Do your best and Happy Writing!

A. Airplane Residence







B. Car-shaped House




C. Toilet House




D. Container House